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Thursday, May 27, 2021

swallowed by the sea

 Hey guys 

Today for this weeks reading I picked swallowed by the sea it was about this girl and her mum and it was poring rain and they went to the beach and the waves swallowed her gumboots and they said that is all their getting and here are my to create task that i have done.🌊

7 comments:

  1. Hi Zoe
    I like the background picture of your poster. Maybe next time you could add more information on your story.

    From Aeryn

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  2. Hi Zoe,
    I like your background for the second create task and maybe next time you can add more information on the second create task and the third one.
    -Hannah

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  3. Hi Zoe, I have really enjoyed your presentation this week, I can tell you have chosen this thoughtfully. Next time with your create task 1 poster, you might like to look at the layout. add some spaces between your bullet points to spread out the information more evenly.

    I look forward to your next post.
    Miss F :)

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  4. Hi zoe
    I like your blog, I love the colors you used and the backrounds. mayby next time add a little more info
    See ya

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