Hey guys
Today I finished my bush walk from camp we had to do what part we wanted to write about at camp and I chose the long walk up the hill which was very challenging and some people didn't like it well everyone didn't liked it and this is why I don't hike.
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Hi Zoe! I like the way you added sounds and expressions.
ReplyDelete- Grace
Hi Zoe
ReplyDeleteI like the description and I like all the sound the sound affects it feels like I'm still walking up that ginormous hill and it was exhausting
- Jade
Hello Zoe.
ReplyDeletethink you should add what you did at camp because the stuff is really short but the descriptive language is very cool in the bush walk😎. Have a good weekend.
-Ethan